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Old 08-28-2008, 02:22 PM
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I shot these also at another workshop i held in the Houston area this past spring. The borders you see i made, and i also have them up for sale if interested in them. Just PM me.





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I like the lighting in #3. It would have been nice if she looked into the camera for more a connection with the viewer.

Also I like the first picture too. What comes to mind is back a bit to get a 3/4 length shot. That way the hands don't get cut off.

What bugs me about #2 is the loose hair strands. Maybe you can use Photoshop to remove them.
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Old 09-06-2008, 04:34 PM
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I like #2...
Both #1 & #3 have slight oversight flaws. 1: Bra Strap is exposed..And also in #1, the eyes look like they are starting to close.

Nice job on the Borders....the Poses on #2 & #3 are good too.
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