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Old 08-17-2008, 07:13 PM
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Havent posted here for awhile. Been pretty busy. Here are 4 shots from fridays shoot with Nikki. I posted them in my album here so the image quality isnt as good. ( I hate that compression) Comments welcome and appreciated. I was experimenting with some different types of looks then my normal glamour stuff.







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Old 08-18-2008, 01:42 PM
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Great Idea,Great Grouping,It Works Very Much Like A Motion Picture.Or A Comic Book Strip.The First Three Images Serve As Chacther Introduction.On The Third she Goes Into Action As A Female Action Hero!The Explosion Reminds me Of The Old Superman Comics.
Number One However Leaves A Lot of white Space Center.Causing My eye To Go There First.
Number Two and Three Show A Threactial Awareness In The Model.
Number Four Is Great but I would Have like to Have Seen Some Explosion Comming Off Of The Sides of The window.With Heat Reflection Disturbing The Vines On The Wall.Over all Very Creative Thinking
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Old 08-18-2008, 02:19 PM
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Thanks Jim... #4 was the vision I had when shooting it but actually making it happen in post was an interesting experiment... It isnt exactly like I would like it but for the first time ever trying something like that I think I did pretty well... I do agree with your suggestions for it but am not sure how to make it happen.

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Scott,

I'm glad to see you back. The site was getting pretty slow.

I like these photos. They look like fun and you had a great model who wanted to do this.

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Old 08-20-2008, 05:26 PM
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Very nice work on these. I like 2-4, 1 is too plain. maybe more dynamic lighting. And the gun a tad higher in the picture..

Glad to see your work agian
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