ShotCritic Photography Critique Forums Portfolios Digital ShotCritic™ A Photography Community Built by the Community

Home Albums Books Contact Forums Today's Posts Search Members   |   Register

Go Back   Shot Critic Photography Forums > Photo Critique Forums > Portraits & People Photography

Notices

Portraits & People Photography Place photos for critiques that fall under the category of portrait and people photography.

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 08-13-2008, 01:19 PM
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 2
Thanks: 1
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
tstrait72 is on a distinguished road
Default My 1st photo shoot

My 1st photo shoot w/ a model. Took these this past Sunday. I'd love to get some constructive feedback on them
Reply With Quote


Dont' forget, upload images to your albums in your member's profile! Want your image displayed on the homepage slideshow, learn how to here!

  #2 (permalink)  
Old 08-14-2008, 06:45 AM
SteveB's Avatar
Just call me Junior

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: NY
Posts: 113
Thanks: 0
Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts
SteveB is on a distinguished road
Default Re: My 1st photo shoot

They look pretty darn good for a first effort!
__________________
Remeber, photography is supposed to be fun!
Reply With Quote
The following user says thanks to SteveB for this useful post!
tstrait72 (08-14-2008)
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 08-15-2008, 05:05 AM
Jim Peters's Avatar
I'll Never Retire!

 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Pittsburgh Pa
Posts: 223
Thanks: 1
Thanked 20 Times in 17 Posts
Jim Peters is on a distinguished road
Default Re: My 1st photo shoot

Lots of Great Potential.
Good Job
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 08-15-2008, 07:12 AM
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 2
Thanks: 1
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
tstrait72 is on a distinguished road
Default Re: My 1st photo shoot

Thanks guys. I've been working on landscape stuff mostly, but I finally got the wife to ease up enough for some model photography
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 08-15-2008, 07:02 PM
VIP Member

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 239
Thanks: 67
Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts
soupman is on a distinguished road
Default Re: My 1st photo shoot

Great start! I like the DOF in all the photos. It sets her apart from the background. Her eyes are soft in the first photo, but I like the profile shot, her hair brings life to th photo and I think the cropping is good.
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 08-17-2008, 07:01 PM
RSStory's Avatar
Moderator/Photographer

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Grand Rapids MI
Posts: 474
Thanks: 50
Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts
RSStory is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to RSStory Send a message via MSN to RSStory Send a message via Yahoo to RSStory
Default Re: My 1st photo shoot

Over all I would say it is a great first shoot with a model. #2 is the best by far in my opinion. The composition is great and the colors all work together. The expression is awesome. Nice job
__________________
Don't shoot what you see.... See what you are shooting!
Reply With Quote
Reply

  • Submit Thread to Digg Digg
  • Submit Thread to del.icio.us del.icio.us
  • Submit Thread to StumbleUpon StumbleUpon
  • Submit Thread to Google Google
  • Bookmarks

    Thread Tools

    Posting Rules
    You may not post new threads
    You may not post replies
    You may not post attachments
    You may not edit your posts

    BB code is On
    Smilies are On
    [IMG] code is On
    HTML code is Off
    Trackbacks are On
    Pingbacks are On
    Refbacks are On





    New to ShotCritic Photography Forums? Need Help in our Digital Photography Community?




    Best Viewed in FireFox or Apple® Safari
    1024 x 768 resolution 32-Bit Color or Better

    Powered by vBulletin®
    Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
    Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.1.0


    © 2007-2008 Shot Critic™