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Old 08-07-2008, 03:19 PM
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I think it's hard to critique so many photos in one thread, so a few random comments.

The first photo I don't really see what you're trying to say.

The photos of the nails you really need to use your cameras macro setting (if it has one). It will be the button or menu item with the picture of a tulip.

The last photo I really like. It has some interesting lines and I keep wanting to look again to see exactly what is in there.

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I know its a lot of photos and not all of them will speak to any one person, if any at all... the first one has a butterfly on the buns.. thats all I thought it was cute.. remember I'm a shutterbug.. I did have my daughter move to shade the bag a bit from the sun but it still caught a tad too much.

2nd and 3rd are a mistake and crop, the friends I was with one grabbed a bunch of grapes while I was trying to capture gulls in takeoff using a higher speed and I caught the grapes instead..

Thanks for the Tulip reference..for the nail... I found it and will try that one again..

As for the rest I was trying to take indoor pictures and had the wrong light setting.. I found the Tungston setting and working on trying to take some indoor appealing photos..

I'm glad you liked the last one I did too..
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