Stars - a new series concept

go1982team · #1 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 06:31 PM

What's up Shot Critic, I've been gone but I'm back now.

I shot with my buddies Adriene and Star again. I tried a new photos series. I would like some feedback on (1) The photography of the shot (2) The concept of the series (3) The selective color vs full color or another effect.

Thanks Guys

(Some of the selective color is not perfect, I will do that later, just wanted you to get to concept)

Jim Peters · #2 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 08:02 PM

Nothing Personal But If This Girl Is Serious About Modeling,She Needs To Get Into Hair and Make Up.And Get To the Gym. I Mean This only In The Most Constructive Way!
Get Her At Least To Pose With Some Posture.Hold That Stomach In.Stretch Her out.
The Selective Color Is A Very good Idea,But all I Can See First Is That Puffy Belly.
The Stars Are A Great Idea And Have Very Good Cemitry On Number 3. Number 4 Would Work Better With A Tighter Butt.YOUR IDEA IS Briliant.With The Right Model.Posing And Make Up Could Make This A Much Better Shot.The Most Rewarding Thing That You Can Do Is To Take Some One That Doesn't look Like A Model And Make Her look Like A Million Dollars! You Have The Foundation To Do That Here.
Jim Peters

go1982team · #3 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 10:12 PM

Lol...thanks for the comments... but know neither of the girls are trying to be models... just good friends that are willing to stand and let me practice shoot them

SteveB · #4 (**permalink**) 06-13-2008, 08:48 PM

I could use friends like that!