hot model

GARYHINDS · #1 (**permalink**) 05-20-2008, 02:07 PM

comments welcome

thanks
gary

Eric E · #2 (**permalink**) 05-20-2008, 02:32 PM

The flash striking her legs is rather distracting to me because of the tonal difference between her legs and the rest of her body. I'd suggest toning that down.
I like the pose overall, but I think her right arm is a distraction. The rest of her body is curved, but her right arm is rigid. Also her left hand looks like it is coming out of her rear-end.

Looks like a nice location and a nice model. Good job overall!

-Eric

Jim Peters · #3 (**permalink**) 05-20-2008, 06:07 PM

I Would Soften The Shadow From Behind Her Calf,Photo Shop Out The Finger Tips from Behind The Leg.Clean Up the Stray Hairs.In The future Try to Display That Hand Closest To the Camera From A Side View.When You Show the Back of A Womans Hand It Is Not As pleasing as It Would Have been If You Would Have Turned It Side Ways,Cupping it Near Her Butt.The Shoes Actuall look A little Oversized(Space Behind the Heals)I Would Have Also Tried A Shot In Her Bare Feet,Up On Her Toes,Same Pose.Love The Rocks,Great Model.Nice Dementional Pose.

Jim Peters · #4 (**permalink**) 05-20-2008, 08:05 PM

Part Two!I Was Running Off To Dinner Before I Got A Chance To add This.
Black Hair Can look like a Helmet if You Don't Add Some Air To The Hair Style,And a Highlite! I Use an Incondesent Mini Spot With A Snout Just Outside of Camera Range.This gives A Controled Spot Of Sunlight Effect.No Matter How straight the Hair styles Are ,I always Suggest That the Model Add Just A Little Curl To the style.This will Give It Body and Pick up Highlites Better!
JP

SteveB · #5 (**permalink**) 05-21-2008, 09:07 AM

1) Hot model - yes

2) My suggestion would be to rotate the photo to straighten the columns. Try it with the rocks going all the way to the edge of the photo on both sides.

Overall - B+++

JKlebPhoto · #6 (**permalink**) 05-21-2008, 10:45 AM

Or crop it a bit more narrow so the rocks run off the edge an she still looks like she's leaning back a bit. Might not work real well on the right side.

Jim Peters · #7 (**permalink**) 05-21-2008, 05:31 PM

FYI Home Depot Carries This Cultured Stone In kit Form.You Can Build One In Your Studio For XYZ DOLLARS.
JP

GARYHINDS · #8 (**permalink**) 05-21-2008, 07:29 PM

any idea how much it is

gary

Jim Peters · #9 (**permalink**) 05-22-2008, 12:42 PM

I'll Check it Out the Next Time I Stop By There.It Is Priced by The Square Foot,Pluss The Cost Of The Morter.In Some Cases You Need A Wire Mesh Attached To the Surface In Order For The Stone To Stick Well.It is Featured In the Contractor Area Of The Store with About 6 Or 8 Different Styles.If You Don't See It,Ask at The Contractors Desk For CULTURED STONE.It Can Be Used Indoor Or Out Doors.Makes A Great Fireplace Facaude As Well.
JP
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