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Old 05-04-2008, 03:00 PM
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Old 05-05-2008, 06:03 AM
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It looks soft.
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Default Re: Roxy from a while ago.

I'll try to say more than it's soft.

I certainly haven't mastered black & white, but it looks like this photo could use a little more contrast and sharpening. I usually don't go for the "up the nose" pose but do like experimenting. I would have liked to see better lighting on her face. It appears you used two main lights, one on the model's left and her right leaving the dark shadow on her face. Judging by the small catch light in her eyes, maybe that light could have been brought up a couple of stops?

Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Old 05-05-2008, 08:08 PM
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Default Re: Roxy from a while ago.

Yeah, I'm almost positive that it was done on purpose for the effect. I'll have to check for the original.
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Default Re: Roxy from a while ago.

somehow it is soft at least for my taste
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