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Old 05-03-2008, 08:04 PM
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Here are a couple of images from my shoot with Tina Rena.



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Great job on both of them. I like the lighting in both. #1 is the best IMO. If I had to be really picky, I guess I would like better lighting on her hair in #2.
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Hi Over All Good,On Number 2 I Don't like The Way That the Fabric Over The Breast Just Chops Off.It Should Flow Like The Fabric At The Waist! Good Job On the Waist Fabric!Shadows On The feet Make Them look A Little Unattractive.
On Number One I May Have Raised Her Up On Something A Little Higher,Added A Cushion To The Top On The Stool.She Seems To Be A Little UnConfortable With The Leg Position. JP
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Exelent stuff here....
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The only thing I would point out in the first one is that she has weight on her right arm that is causing her tricep to buldge out a bit. Other then that very nice.

I agree with Jim on the second one.
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Old 05-04-2008, 09:46 PM
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Thanks everyone for the comments. She was a lot of fun to work with.
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