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Old 04-19-2008, 12:52 AM
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Default Shooting Amy Davis

Here is a shot of Amy Davis who has recently been seen all over the place in the news, Maxim, and television (American Idol top 24). She'll even be a feature model at RG's upcoming workshop in the Virgin Islands. Wish I could be there again. Its a real blast. Amy is one of the nicest people you'll meet and a delight to work with. Here is a shot of her:


There is a small problem with the shot, however. How would you fix it?

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Old 04-19-2008, 08:06 AM
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Default Re: Shooting Amy Davis

the island above her face kinda blends into her face...id remove it so her face was what draws you to...then the island is a a "whats that"...

well?

thanks for all you advise!
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Old 04-26-2008, 01:06 AM
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Default Re: Shooting Amy Davis

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Amy is one of the nicest people you'll meet and a delight to work with.
She's easy on the eyes too. I'd love to see more of your work with her.
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Old 04-28-2008, 04:28 PM
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Default Re: Shooting Amy Davis

The sun you placed in the shot doesn't work with the shadows. Also the pose isn't working for me... any others from the shoot?
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