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Old 03-25-2008, 12:42 PM
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Here are two photos for your most honest C&C + suggestions...

Do not mind the signature because these photos I do for unknown person who like to get involved with modeling and I do it free of charge, so that's why at least I have add also free of charge..... but I do not want to loose time for preparing the separate file for net only... Hope it is reasonable....
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Old 03-25-2008, 10:43 PM
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First...The poses are good...and even though #2 is not center,
I still like the crop.

2nd: Lighting.
Make sure that the eyes are out of the shadows..In #1. You could use a reflecter close to the face to "Fill" the shadow with light from the main light...Same for #2. but more so..Maybe a seperate fill strobe.

Even if the face is at an angle from the Main Light..the shadow side needs light on the eyes 95% of the time..see Example..


Try those pseses again, but with more "Fill" on the face. See how you like it.
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