SO, CRITIC - Some new photos

zakDigital · #1 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 04:45 PM

Hi,
Yes, i just gor registration here and here I show some latest photos for your inputs, or better say for C&C... or even which one to put in a basket far away from people's eyes.....

Regards Zak
PS. consider that I'm an amateur....BIG ONE

RSStory · #2 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 05:00 PM

I like the second one alot. My only nit would be the black bar at the bottom with your copyright on it. Tuck your copyright in the corner of an image and make it so that it doesnt distract from the image.

The other images dont really do anything for me.

#1 Turn the models shoulders to the camera just slightly and that would help alot.

#3 Her forehead looks over photoshopped to me and you cropped below the elbow and that doesnt work in this shot.

#4 Looks soft to me and her hair blends into the background.

Nice work overall. Keep posting.

Scott

Electricseashell · #3 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 05:01 PM

Welcome.. none of these will make it to the basket

I'm a shutterbug so my critique comes from what I'm learning here and I like them.. the only thing I see off hand is the shadows. RFS has posted some lighting tips here and they can give you a better critique. Thanks for sharing your photos.
Shutterbug Electricseashell

r_fredrick_smith · #4 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 07:51 PM

#2 is the best of the bunch but it has basic problems of being cropped too tightly. The poses on the other three are just not quite there. If you have a looser crop of #2, try posting it.
Cheers,
rfs

BlueCrow · #5 (**permalink**) 03-17-2008, 08:10 PM

Overall not bad. I agree with Scott and rfs, #2 is the best of the 4. Other than comments already made, IMO the placement of the copyright on your images is distracting.