ShotCritic Photography Critique Forums Portfolios Digital ShotCritic™ A Photography Community Built by the Community

Home Albums Books Contact Forums Today's Posts Search Members   |   Register

Go Back   Shot Critic Photography Forums > Photo Critique Forums > Glamour & Beauty Photography

Notices

Glamour & Beauty Photography Place photos for critiques that fall under the category of glamour & beauty photography.

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2008, 12:58 AM
paul54's Avatar
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Atlanta, Georgia
Posts: 6
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts
paul54 is on a distinguished road
Default Jade

She is really a jewel to photo shoot. Very creative model.



Reply With Quote
The Following 2 Users Say Thank You to paul54 For This Useful Post:
F Stop Fitzgerald (03-16-2008), soupman (03-16-2008)


Dont' forget, upload images to your albums in your member's profile! Want your image displayed on the homepage slideshow, learn how to here!

  #2 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2008, 01:02 AM
F Stop Fitzgerald's Avatar
Skip Runge/Mt Pleasant SC

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mt Pleasant (Charleston), SC
Posts: 65
Thanks: 16
Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
F Stop Fitzgerald is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

Wow, great use of color in that top image! Super backround "find."

Skip
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2008, 09:22 AM
RSStory's Avatar
Moderator/Photographer

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Grand Rapids MI
Posts: 474
Thanks: 50
Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts
RSStory is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to RSStory Send a message via MSN to RSStory Send a message via Yahoo to RSStory
Default Re: Jade

I like #1. Good capture.

#2. there seems to be some light falling on her right cheek that give the face a deformed look. Other then that it is a nice shot of a beautiful woman.

Scott
__________________
Don't shoot what you see.... See what you are shooting!
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2008, 09:42 AM
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
drichards is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

Great background and model, only thing I see is that I would like to see her hands in photo number 1. Nice job, just my thoughts.
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 03-16-2008, 10:49 PM
Mstal's Avatar
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 12
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Mstal is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

Love the first one. At first glance I thought she was beside a moving train. The background has a feel of movement or it's just me. Beautiful models, both of them. The second I really love the light and colors. Did you use a gel for the main light to get the skin that color?
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2008, 01:43 AM
paul54's Avatar
Junior Member

 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Atlanta, Georgia
Posts: 6
Thanks: 0
Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts
paul54 is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

The second image was shot with continuous lights instead of strobe (mine first). There is gel for the background only. I shot raw on my camera, then bump the WB in Lightroom to around 3400K, I think, thus making the skin color look warm.
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2008, 09:01 AM
SteveB's Avatar
Just call me Junior

 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: NY
Posts: 113
Thanks: 0
Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts
SteveB is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

Very nice Paul!
__________________
Remeber, photography is supposed to be fun!
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 03-17-2008, 10:53 AM
Dnoces's Avatar
TakenShots

 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 76
Thanks: 2
Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
Dnoces is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Jade

Yes love the first photo, the model really pops out. I personally like that the hands are not visible.
Reply With Quote
Reply

  • Submit Thread to Digg Digg
  • Submit Thread to del.icio.us del.icio.us
  • Submit Thread to StumbleUpon StumbleUpon
  • Submit Thread to Google Google
  • Bookmarks

    Thread Tools

    Posting Rules
    You may not post new threads
    You may not post replies
    You may not post attachments
    You may not edit your posts

    BB code is On
    Smilies are On
    [IMG] code is On
    HTML code is Off
    Trackbacks are On
    Pingbacks are On
    Refbacks are On




    New to ShotCritic Photography Forums? Need Help in our Digital Photography Community?




    Best Viewed in FireFox or Apple® Safari
    1024 x 768 resolution 32-Bit Color or Better

    Powered by vBulletin®
    Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
    Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0


    © 2007-2008 Shot Critic™