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Old 07-27-2008, 05:02 PM
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comment on this addition to the calendar.. Illyse





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Old 07-27-2008, 09:09 PM
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Default Re: calendar girl Illyse

Diffenently a June Photo... Sun, Water, Women in Bikini's....
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Old 07-28-2008, 07:14 AM
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Default Re: calendar girl Illyse

First impression is that the image is very good!

If you want the real nit pick to get to the next level here goes...
Her hands look a little awkward.
You may want to add a little more blue to the water.
This one is pure opinion - I always believe that the swimsuit or any clothes should be either lighter or darker than the models skin tones. In this case it is a little to close in color.

All that being said it is still a very good shot.
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Old 07-28-2008, 12:35 PM
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Default Re: calendar girl Illyse

Dito,The Left Hand Needs To Be Less Claw like.On The Hair Always Watch When It Starts Showing Under The Chin It Can Start looking Like A Beard.I Actually like The Monocromatic look Of The Suite Against The Water Just The Way It Is.Very Easy On the Eyes.
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Old 07-31-2008, 04:37 PM
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Default Re: calendar girl Illyse

Add some blue to the water. Once that is done i would like this picture that much more. Nice shot.
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Old 07-31-2008, 11:52 PM
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how this look



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