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Old 07-20-2008, 11:56 PM
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Shot this way up in the mountains of North Carolina. Same place where they filmed the movie Dirty Dancing. comments are always welcome. nikon d300 and 70-200 vr
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Old 07-21-2008, 06:50 AM
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I Like The Use of Rocks In The Background,Same Old Pull Down The Bikini On One Side Pose,Do You Have Any Other?Or Other Expressions?
Pay Attention To Hand Positions.A Lot Of Veins Present On Her Left Hand.
Good Over all Image.
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Old 07-21-2008, 08:39 AM
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The lighting on her looks fine. If possible a little slaved flash to knock out the shadow on the background would be great.

I hope when you pick your final 12 shots you will put them up for us!
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Hi Gary, small comment, I would change the color of the water to more of an teal or blue, rather than the current yellowish green color than is being picked up from the surrounding vegetation. This is a quick two minute adjustment, if that. That said, I like your picture. And your model is beautiful.
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