My first post

Don · #1 (**permalink**) 07-05-2008, 05:00 AM

These are my first three edits from last weeks shoot with Abeze.

darengray · #2 (**permalink**) 07-05-2008, 07:29 AM

I want to like image 1 but the head/eye alignment needs work I would have her look directly in the camera. and the softening has been over done.

Image 2 head/ eye alignment there are better way to get that shot

Image 3 head/ eye alignment she only has one arm the colors are muddled.

I would also work on lighting think about lighting your subject in layers

Good luck and keep shooting

Jim Peters · #3 (**permalink**) 07-05-2008, 12:14 PM

On number One, When the Hand(Under The Breast) Is That Close To The Lens,And You Can See The Back Of It,It Becomes Very Masculine looking. I like the Pose, Just Show More Of The Side Of The Hand To Slim It Down. Same Hand Problem Accurs On Image 3. I Also Agree With all The Other Comments.
JP

soupman · #4 (**permalink**) 07-05-2008, 04:02 PM

I like # 1 but the comment on the hand does apply here. #2 I did a double-take on her left elbow. It looks way out of place. #3 I don't think the bed see is reclining on was helping to show her shape. But, I like the lighting. Thanks