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[darengray]

[Jim Peters]

Number 2 Is Really Nice,I Also would Like to See One That I can Read the Message Better on the Pants,And Or Cape.
Number 1 My Eyes Go All Over The Place,Then End Up Resting At She Studio 5-13 Sign Comming Out Of Her Breast.
This Could be A Very Interesting Sequence,Telling A Story About A Female Super Hero.I See One Of Her On One In Just The Cape With A Strong Backlight,Outlining Her Figure.But We Can Also Read The Message On The Cape!Then A Close Up ,Just Of Her Message on the Bottoms.Etc.
Keep Working On This!It Is A GREAT IDEA!
JP

[darengray]

problem with image one is a lack of a second arm . As far as the “A Strong Backlight,Outlining Her Figure” well that would be well over done. Last point that’s an ass not a library no need to read it just go with the colors It a Spider Man towel wolverine underwear and bat man glove


Thanks again

[Arbib]

I like them both..

#1...Clone out the sign at her breast...When I look at her face, the triangular composition of the scooter and her body, balances nicely. A bit unconventional, but it does work.

#2....Just fine..as is...

[Jim Peters]

I Dont Find The second Arm A Problem.I Like To Use More G Rated Terms When I Talk About A Models Anatomy.It Sounds More Professional To All Involved.
JP

[MDeetz]

Both pictures are nice, however I do like the second one better. Are you planning more with this young lady?

[kombizz]

need better contrast on her face #2