vicky bikini shot

[GARYHINDS]

love to have some feedback on this


thanks
gary

[Arbib]

I like the pose and lighting as a whole...The BG Boken is nice, the lack of BG distractions is good too. My only suggestion would be to have a better expression..She looks a bit confused or miffed. All in all, a nice photo. Do you have more of this session ?

[Eric E]

I agree with Arbib in that her expression does look a bit...ah, pained...
It also looks like the flash may have overpowered the natural light a bit.

But it's good overall. And I wouldn't mind seeing more from the session either.

[Jim Peters]

I Agree With All Of The Above.However Be careful When going Into A Pose like This,Take Note That Her Butt Is Pushing Just a Little To Hard Against The Post ,Starting To Cause A Flat Spot.Back Of Hand,When It Is In This Position,Close To The Lens, Shows Veins.I Would Have Curved It Along Her Side,Just Revealing The Side Of the Hand.Attention To Detail In the Hair On The Shoulder,Loose Strands,Well That's all A Matter of Individual Taste.
Good Model,Lines On Either Sides of Mouth Could Be Softened In Photoshop.
Models That are Smokers Can Get These Lines At A Very Young Age.
They Are Called Draw lines.Good Old Photoshop Will Make Them love You!

[soupman]

Great tips that I will try to remember in the heat of the photographic moment. It can get overwhelming without a LOTof practice.