Jennie O

darrellp · #1 (**permalink**) 06-09-2008, 10:20 PM

Shot with Jennie the other day for the first time in three years.

chrishw · #2 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 09:42 AM

Very nice pose.
Question. Should the light in front of her be a bit more softer? Her left shoulder and arm seems to be washed out.

Jim Peters · #3 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 11:34 AM

Rotating the Eyes to the Extreem Left Or Right Always Shows TOO Much White Of The Eyes.Have Her look JUST A LITTLE More To The Front To Avoid This.
Hand Positions look Awakward.Could Be improved.
I Like the Full Rose Bud Appearence of Her Lips.And The Gradation Of The Backdrop.
jim peters

darrellp · #4 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 10:13 PM

Chris,
Thanks for the feed back. The light that is washing out her left shoulder and arm is actually the hairlight above her. To camera left, there are two softboxes. To camera right there are two silver reflectors.

darrellp · #5 (**permalink**) 06-10-2008, 10:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jim Peters

Rotating the Eyes to the Extreme Left Or Right Always Shows TOO Much White Of The Eyes.Have Her look JUST A LITTLE More To The Front To Avoid This.
jim peters

Jim,
I agree. The thing that i'd most likely change would be her eyes. Appreciate the positve feedback.

SteveB · #6 (**permalink**) 06-13-2008, 07:47 PM

Watch your crop on the hands.

Maybe shoot from a little lower angle, other than that... right on!

darrellp · #7 (**permalink**) 06-13-2008, 10:08 PM

Steve,
Thanks, I did blow the crop on the hands. Shooting from a lower angle is not what I'm aiming for in this image.

Arbib · #8 (**permalink**) 06-14-2008, 08:50 AM

All of the above....

Plus my 2c...
I like the pose. I would try to put more attention on the face as the main POI (Point of Interest)...Then the rest of the pose will fall in place...I like the lower angle BTW.

darengray · #9 (**permalink**) 07-04-2008, 09:02 PM

Whare are you showing what is out POI