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Old 05-24-2008, 01:15 AM
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Old 05-25-2008, 12:33 AM
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Gary, my eye is not nearly as critical as the eyes of some here but for me I have to say this image is a real bell ringer and it looks like you did everything right. When L look at a photo, I look for what pleases me asthetically first and then techincally second and this looks like a good photo. I especially like the way you opened up the lens to blow out the background. I like the model, like the pose, like everything. Keep it up.
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Gary, I must agree. Nice photograph.
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Old 05-25-2008, 12:52 PM
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Kudos Dude I'm Impressed!
If You Wanted To be A Little Overly Critical,The Arm On My Right Is A little Lighter Than Any Thing Else,And You May Have Wanted A Little More Space Between It And Her Body.When You Have A Girl Pull Up on Her Suite Like That,Also Try Positioning The Hands In Some Additional Different Ways.Give Your Self Some Different Versions To Choose From.Also Work With The Hair, Be Constantly Combing It When You Are Working With A Model With Course,Straight, Dark, Hair.It Can Help You Get The Smoothest look To the Hair.I Always Have Some One On Location To Help Style As We Go Along.
Cute Girl,Great Job!
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Gary,
Gorgeous model. Tough to find a lot wrong with it.
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Old 06-13-2008, 08:44 PM
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What's not to like!!!

Just watch hot spot on the arm in back otherwise OUTSTANDING!
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