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Old 05-12-2008, 11:41 AM
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Old 05-12-2008, 02:56 PM
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Looks a little cold (WB) to me. Could be the monitor.
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Old 05-12-2008, 04:04 PM
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I dont mind the WB on this one, it may be a little cold but you are just at the verge of it. The one thing that stands out is her left hand, it doesnt look very natural in that position it looks like she is about to get a hand cramp or is having one now...

Also the belly hardware is a little distracting since you are not visably able to see it very well, it now becomes a sparkley distration.
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Old 05-12-2008, 05:34 PM
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Hand Looks like A Claw,Face And Eyes Need To Be A Little More Relaxed,And I Always Try To Convince The Customer To stay Away From The Dark,Black/Navy Blue Nail Polish.This Is Overly Trendy.Regular Nails Will Make The Image Far More Timeless.She Has The Face Of An Angel And The Claws Of..Well You Know. I Have Often Changed The Color Of The Nails With Photo Shop To Show The Customer The Difference. Give It A Try!You Will be Amazed At Her Reaction.Keep Up The Good Work.
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