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Old 03-19-2008, 06:58 PM
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I guess this could be an editorial shot for a magazine in Texas. Or it could be a rather soft glamour shot (I was focusing on the star).


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Old 03-19-2008, 10:44 PM
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No you wern't otherwise the star wouldnt be as dark as it is.. you aint foolin this gal.. lol
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Old 03-19-2008, 10:49 PM
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The model's cute; the star is REALLY cool, though! Where's you find something like that?

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Old 03-19-2008, 10:54 PM
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Default Re: Texas Star

I think the light looks to harsh on her arm and her hand looks odd to me.

On a completely different note, and not relevant to this post....I see most of your shots comming from a couple years ago. Are you still shooting at all or what? Just a question and no disrespect intended.

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Old 03-20-2008, 08:21 AM
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Here is my answer with this photo as a metaphor



I guess this might be considered an editorial shot also.

Anyway, see my pm on the off topic part of the response.

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Old 03-20-2008, 10:09 AM
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Actually, love the shot of the film canister!

For me the model shot lighting doesn't work. The star and legs are to dark and blend into the background.
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