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Old 03-16-2008, 03:51 PM
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Old 03-16-2008, 04:02 PM
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Nice.. but if you want a valid critique you should seperate the images to a thread of smaller portions. Each image will have different suggestions. Posting so many dilutes the critique. If you want to keep them all in the same thread then post one let the masters here critique it.. then move to the next one..
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I love the top one.. the lines of the bridge follow the lines of the car.. nice touch.. keep contributing Shutterbug Electricseashell
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Old 03-16-2008, 05:05 PM
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I dont mind that there are several images in a post as long as they are tied together in a theme. If you put a headshot in the middle of the cars that wouldnt work so well for me.

Overall very nice work. The first and 3rd are my favorites.

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Old 03-16-2008, 09:40 PM
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I noticed on second look at his posts he probably isn't looking for critiques.. lol all of his photos are pretty professional.. so I will just hush

I like the third one too were you driving along side.. I mean did you have someone else drive for you? lol
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Old 03-16-2008, 09:44 PM
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I noticed on second look at his posts he probably isn't looking for critiques.. lol all of his photos are pretty professional.. so I will just hush

I like the third one too were you driving along side.. I mean did you have someone else drive for you? lol
dont do that... The whole premise of this site is that ALL images in posts and in albums are open for critique. No one needs toask for them and no one is exempt from them. If they are here on the site then you can comment or critque them. We can all learn from anyone regardless of their current skill levels.

Dont hush...keep commenting.

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Old 03-16-2008, 10:09 PM
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A very nice campaign ad series...
I really like the comparison of the Car Roof Line and the Bridge...
The Wheel is an amazing shot !! How did you plan that one?

Looks like you had an interesting day or two.
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dont do that... The whole premise of this site is that ALL images in posts and in albums are open for critique. No one needs toask for them and no one is exempt from them. If they are here on the site then you can comment or critque them. We can all learn from anyone regardless of their current skill levels.

Dont hush...keep commenting.

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Ok the second photo doesnt work with the bridge quite as well as the first. The spoiler is lost in the line and I can see the photographers in the front bumper.
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Old 03-16-2008, 11:41 PM
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I noticed on second look at his posts he probably isn't looking for critiques.. lol all of his photos are pretty professional.. so I will just hush

I like the third one too were you driving along side.. I mean did you have someone else drive for you? lol
I just like to post and share my work.... so you're right I didn't exactly post to seek a critique, not to say that i don't welcome them, i love to know what people think. Know what I mean? lol

And yes that third one was shot car to car....i have a driver I bring with me on shoots that require motion shots.
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