[tyrsman]

Thanks for the tips guys. Some stuff that you pointed out I did from suggestions of other photographers, and next time I'll try to incorporate some of your tips and see how they go. As far as there being to much lighting, next time I'll lower the intensity on my strobe and see if that works better. I did use a fill light on the other side but I think the main strobe was too overpowering. I also lightened the pic a bit and added a bit more yellow in post. I'm going to check the original shot again and compare the lighting. As far as the trophy in the picture, the shoot was done to promote the model who is a fitness competitor, so we did a couple of shots with the trophy in it. Thanks for taking the time to critique, I need all the help I can get since I'm just working by trial and error.