[Jim Peters]

Too Much Going On In That Background!First Shot ,Crease In Her Side.Expression Needs Help.I Get the Impression That She Really Would like To Be Some Where Else.On Number Two, Slouched Mid Section Then We look Up Her Chin And Nose.Mid section Not Tight On Number One.Number One is Your Best Pose I Would Do Some Modifications to The Background,Tighten Tummy,Use A More sexy Expression,Watch That Crease In The Side.Experiment More With Lighting.
JP