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Old 03-17-2008, 05:00 PM
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Default Re: SO, CRITIC - Some new photos
I like the second one alot. My only nit would be the black bar at the bottom with your copyright on it. Tuck your copyright in the corner of an image and make it so that it doesnt distract from the image.

The other images dont really do anything for me.

#1 Turn the models shoulders to the camera just slightly and that would help alot.

#3 Her forehead looks over photoshopped to me and you cropped below the elbow and that doesnt work in this shot.

#4 Looks soft to me and her hair blends into the background.

Nice work overall. Keep posting.

Scott
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