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Old 03-17-2008, 08:48 AM
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Default Re: Kerry-Ring Flash Series

I would suggest that you upload images into you album here so that you can post the larger version in your posts. I see that you do have images in the album so may as well utilize that feature of the site.

As for these shots.

1. Her expression is working for me and you have some hot spots on her belly and breast.With the belly being hot and then the shadow it is making her belly look like it is bulging out.

2. Again, I am not liking her expression. I would also suggest having her drop her right shoulder a bit and hold her head up where it belongs. She just looks very scrunched up in the neck and shoulders area.

Ring lights can be fun once you get the hang of them.

Scott
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