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Old 03-14-2008, 08:48 PM
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Default Re: Terrace

Nice shot, beautiful model... but... I find the building/tree to create a certain tension (it seems shes looking at it, but it's obviously behind her view) that this shot doesn't need. Nice S-curves. The flashe's shadow cast from the brim of the hat to the crown of the hat is a bit awkward.. Hard to catch these without modeling lights... and in this daylight setting modeling lights would not be bright enough to see anyway. Perhaps placing the strobe higher and a wicked-large silver reflector in the grass, out of view to fill under the hat/chin might have worked. Nice job mind you...
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